So...I've been writing a new book story thing. I really, really like it and I would love for others to read it but I don't really know. Would other people enjoy the story and want to keep reading it or will it just be undiscovered for all eternity? o.o I'm just throwing it out there that I have been writing a new story and I might post it. I already finished two chapters.
If I do post it I would love some constructive criticism. I want to improve my skills and develop them. I want to be the best I can. However harshness does not mean it's helpful. Just keep that in mind in general when you are critiquing someone. X3
I saw a bear. It was a black bear and her cub. They were eating from a dumpster. And they were pretty close.
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It wasn't as exciting as I thought it would be BUT at least I get the chance to say that I saw one! :D They will be coming back tomorrow, maybe I'll go out again. But don't expect any pictures since it will be dark and you probably will just see black or something. And also do you even see any photographs on this account? XD
Also I'm sunburnt.
The group somehow managed to run all the way down the hill and back to Haley's house without stopping. After running into the basement everyone fell onto their sleeping bags and started panting. Haley suddenly yelped in fear. "Oh no! We don't have a door! What are we supposed to do if it comes to eat is," cried Haley. She brought her purple sleeping bag to her face. Her brown eyes were full of tears to the brim and she truly looked terrified. Jayson swallowed and extended a shaky arm to her. He wrapped it around her shoulders and slightly hugged her. I imagine that if he tried to speak his voice would be very shaky.
Jackson on the other hand